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    Default Newbie @ Sentosa Flower Show

    Hi Folks,
    I would be most grateful if you could critique my shots below. I'll say what I'm trying to do, and you folks tell me how it goes..... and how it can be improved.....
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    [IMG]C:\Documents and Settings\SHARIN\My Documents\My Pictures\Olympus E-510\0802 - Feb 08\CNY Sentosa Flower Show\P2090815[/IMG]
    [IMG]C:\Documents and Settings\SHARIN\My Documents\My Pictures\Olympus E-510\0802 - Feb 08\CNY Sentosa Flower Show\P2090792[/IMG]

    With this cactus and poinsetta, I was trying to get just close-ups and part of the subject, not the whole flower. Slightly different perspective, I guess. Does it work?
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    [IMG]C:\Documents and Settings\SHARIN\My Documents\My Pictures\Olympus E-510\0802 - Feb 08\CNY Sentosa Flower Show\P2090776[/IMG]
    With this pink cherry blossom (I think...), I'm trying to get a clear subject with nice bouquet in the background. Is the background too noisy?

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    [IMG]C:\Documents and Settings\SHARIN\My Documents\My Pictures\Olympus E-510\0802 - Feb 08\CNY Sentosa Flower Show\P2090800[/IMG]
    [IMG]C:\Documents and Settings\SHARIN\My Documents\My Pictures\Olympus E-510\0802 - Feb 08\CNY Sentosa Flower Show\P2090759[/IMG]
    With these, I'm trying to get the effect of a "sea of flowers". Other than the few legs in the background (it was very crowded), does it work?
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    [IMG]C:\Documents and Settings\SHARIN\My Documents\My Pictures\Olympus E-510\0802 - Feb 08\CNY Sentosa Flower Show\P2090732[/IMG]
    [IMG]C:\Documents and Settings\SHARIN\My Documents\My Pictures\Olympus E-510\0802 - Feb 08\CNY Sentosa Flower Show\P2090807[/IMG]

    And lastly, with these, I'm just shooting one subject in the foreground, straight forward. Is there too much in the background? How can it be improved?
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    Many Thanks for your comments! Help a newbie get better!

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    Default Re: Newbie @ Sentosa Flower Show

    you need to upload your pictures to an online photograph hosting site before linking them here. the following are instructions for posting images http://forums.clubsnap.com/showthread.php?t=94574

    also, please read and understand the posting guidelines for critique corner

    http://forums.clubsnap.com/showthread.php?t=139941

    http://forums.clubsnap.com/showthread.php?t=273376

    take some time to go through them before making a post. thanks.

    thread closed.

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