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    Default Colour My Life



    *EDIT* Photo comes out abit grainy here. -Changed the pic to a smaller one with flickr.

    Take a look here instead.

    http://www.flickr.com/photos/22898640@N04/2197709907/

    Comments and Criticism please.

    Taken with a HP Photosmart R407 that i have to make do with now.

    Its a 4.1mp camera. but oh well.

    Saving for a dslr now. haha.

    Cheers
    James
    Last edited by jmsjc; 30th January 2008 at 10:24 PM.

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    Default Re: Colour My Life

    the orange bit on the top right distracts my attention from the colour pencils.

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    Default Re: Colour My Life

    Quote Originally Posted by jamestan_33 View Post
    the orange bit on the top right distracts my attention from the colour pencils.
    I agree... a tighter crop may work better in this case.
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    Default Re: Colour My Life

    Try not to place the interesting portion (aka the colourful pencil tips in this case) right in the center of the pic.....use rule of third. Now a tighter crop with good placement of the tips can still be done. UP the contrast a bit too.

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    The orange thing in the background is kinda distracting, and you could ahve used a tighter crop of only focusing on the pencils and lesser depth of field, other than that, its nice
    I tried bouncing my flash and it broke into 2 pieces... :bheart:
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