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Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: Singapore
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Join Date: Jan 2006
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I feel that there are too many colours, causing a bit of confusion
I mean the photo is not pleasing to the eye. Maybe you would like to try to crop away the first 4 instruments. At the same time, cropped away some parts of the strings of the remaining instruments.The repeating pattern is good. There is one black instrument that breaks the pattern, adding interest. Keep shooting!!! ![]() |
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Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: North
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The picture composition to me works ok... there's a evenly distributed pattern among the instrument... other than the one at the far right thats slight turned... could have made that one fronted too...
However, this picture could be improved if somehow its showing how this instrument is used... like maybe someone in the back ground using it (a blurred vision) instead of the black background. I presume its something like a recorder type of instrument. ![]()
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