Results 1 to 8 of 8

Thread: My View of Clifford Pier

  1. #1

    Default My View of Clifford Pier



    Any comments on how to improve this?

    Shot was taken handheld .. I find a bit soft though.
    Guess I could have used a tripod for better results.

  2. #2
    Sanyu
    Guests

    Default

    Good shot, only distraction is the 2 guys, kept pulling my attention away from the structure that leads from top-left to bottom-right (I have to force myself to ignore the 2 guys in order to reach the bottom-right of the photo). I rather have the 2 guys at the bottom-right of the photo or not have them at all.

  3. #3
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Jan 2003
    Location
    Siglap
    Posts
    1,828

    Default

    Originally posted by Sanyu
    Good shot, only distraction is the 2 guys, kept pulling my attention away from the structure that leads from top-left to bottom-right (I have to force myself to ignore the 2 guys in order to reach the bottom-right of the photo). I rather have the 2 guys at the bottom-right of the photo or not have them at all.
    Actually I feel that the 2 guys contributes to a sense of scale. Nice shot!

  4. #4

  5. #5

    Default

    Originally posted by Sanyu
    Good shot, only distraction is the 2 guys, kept pulling my attention away from the structure that leads from top-left to bottom-right (I have to force myself to ignore the 2 guys in order to reach the bottom-right of the photo). I rather have the 2 guys at the bottom-right of the photo or not have them at all.
    Hmm.. my idea was to inject some "lifeform" in the scene to make it less.. the bottom right corner of the pic was actually overexposed due to the harsh afternoon sun

  6. #6
    Moderator ziploc's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2002
    Location
    Snoopyland
    Posts
    4,577

    Default

    Originally posted by toomz
    Hmm.. my idea was to inject some "lifeform" in the scene to make it less.. the bottom right corner of the pic was actually overexposed due to the harsh afternoon sun
    Very nice shot. I agree with thoa_rs, I too think that the presence of the 2 guys contributes to and supports the picture, otherwise it would just be a boring empty building. The bright spot at the lower right is actually ok, and together with the ceiling and the floor gave the picture a lively and interesting tonality.

  7. #7

    Default

    Very nicely compose. B/W does add some mood to it.

  8. #8

    Default

    Like the composition of the shot bery much

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •