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Old 11th December 2007   #1
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I was doing some shots last sunday when I captured this shot. My first attempt at street photograpgy ...

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Old 11th December 2007   #2
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I was doing some shots last sunday when I captured this shot. My first attempt at street photograpgy ...

Judging by your thread title, I suppose the main subject is on the statue rather than the kids?
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Old 11th December 2007   #3
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crop out the real kids and just focus on the statues.
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Old 12th December 2007   #4
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Or leave it as it is, but re-title it:

"Hmm...should I?"

But I would crop out or post the girl on thr right. She's a distraction.
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Old 12th December 2007   #5
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hihi,
Thanks everyone for your comments.
Ya the statue is the main subject, but I was wondering what he was thinking as he was looking at the statue l. I included him in so that it adds some human element to the photo. I agreed that the girl on the right is a distraction ...

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Ya I think a more appropriate title could be " Should I ? "

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Old 18th December 2007   #6
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your pic seems unusually sharp to me.. did u sharpen it or is it my monitor?
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Old 19th December 2007   #7
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your pic seems unusually sharp to me.. did u sharpen it or is it my monitor?
Hi Tionghan,
yup I sharpen it. I have a penchant for tack sharp photos ...

Was it overdone here?
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Old 19th December 2007   #8
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Was it overdone here?
look over-sharpen on my screen.
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Old 26th December 2007   #9
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hey bro good attempt. i understand what you're trying to get at with this photo. perhaps if you use a b/w or sepia tone with some contrast tweaks you can bring out the statues and de-emphasise the real kids then i think the impact would be greater.
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Old 26th December 2007   #10
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Hi allsmilez ,

Thanks for you comments. Still in the mist of enhancing my PS skills ... hehe.
I will note you advice.
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