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I was doing some shots last sunday when I captured this shot. My first attempt at street photograpgy ...
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crop out the real kids and just focus on the statues.
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Or leave it as it is, but re-title it:
"Hmm...should I?" But I would crop out or post the girl on thr right. She's a distraction. |
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hihi,
Thanks everyone for your comments. Ya the statue is the main subject, but I was wondering what he was thinking as he was looking at the statue l. I included him in so that it adds some human element to the photo. I agreed that the girl on the right is a distraction ... Dream Merchant, Ya I think a more appropriate title could be " Should I ? " ![]()
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your pic seems unusually sharp to me.. did u sharpen it or is it my monitor?
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yup I sharpen it. I have a penchant for tack sharp photos ... ![]() Was it overdone here? ![]()
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hey bro good attempt. i understand what you're trying to get at with this photo. perhaps if you use a b/w or sepia tone with some contrast tweaks you can bring out the statues and de-emphasise the real kids then i think the impact would be greater.
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Hi allsmilez ,
Thanks for you comments. Still in the mist of enhancing my PS skills ... hehe. I will note you advice. ![]()
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