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    Hello! Another small little series. Also viewable in my APAD. Hope you are like it. C&C welcomed. Harsh comments are warmly welcomed as well.


    My Mood - Gloomy...






    My Mood - Fallen...




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    My Mood - Dead...


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    I would appriciate some comments.

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    Ok let's see, harsh comments huh ... Just kidding.

    I like the 1st one best, as it does give me gloomy feeling, but could be improved on framing as the small leaf at the bottom is distracting.
    The first 2 have "looking up" view, kind of like a bug's view looking up.
    The #2 is labeled fallen, but the flower is still up high in the frame.
    #3 needs a better background I think. Just my 3 cents.
    Last edited by lynxiger; 19th December 2007 at 09:41 PM. Reason: Fix spelling

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    Quote Originally Posted by lynxiger View Post
    Ok let's see, harsh comments huh ... Just kidding.

    I like the 1st one best, as it does give me gloomy feeling, but could be improved on framing as the small leaf at the bottom is distracting.
    The first 2 have "looking up" view, kind of like a bug's view looking up.
    The #2 is labeled fallen, but the flower is still up high in the frame.
    #3 needs a better background I think. Just my 3 cents.
    Thanks for your comment! At last someone can give some comments.

    #2 is labeled fallen, because the flower has fallen from its tree to another leave below.

    #3, agreed it needs a better background.

    Thanks!

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    Hmmm... not really sure what's your mood, because not really sure where do you focus... haha!
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    This is how I feel:

    Pic 1 is not too bad. Quite close to the theme.

    Pic 2. I think you may want to change the angle. Otherwise, it can be confusing of what has fallen.

    Oic 3. I think it will be better if there is only one flower instead of two. However, I like the silhoutte feeling.

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