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Old 4th December 2007   #1
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Saw this family at Liang Court while walking,the exposure was off,face abit dull and background a bit blown,did photoshop,not sure if its good enough,i feel like it's not good enough,C&C please,thanks a lot people
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well u did think its not good enough so you should have put in more effort before posting here mah

the face is underexposed so something shld be done to it definitely. He's got quite an innocent smile!

Go for tighter crop, the woman's bag taking up too much space in the frame le..the boy needs more attention.

well contrast needs to be increased too, with exposure and some cropping summarily. I think its a great picture
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Thanks a lot sprintist,well,i already did the best to my knowledge,i agree the bag is taking up to much space,just realised it before posting it,but only 5megapix,want to print to A4,lol,here is a cropped brightened one,any more comments?
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i really like the second pic way more. The connection between the kid's eye and myself is very attracting. I think the only thing left is the sharpness and colours. just my 2cts but the cropping and exposure to me is
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thanks a lot Sprintist,i find the 2nd one way better too,just forgot to adjust colour before posting,and well,5 megapix camera,not too good lens,results as such,lol
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fluffy feel!!! XD
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fluffy feel!!! XD
fluffy feel?
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