Dead Rim Flower

king2penn · 29th November 2007

http://www.flickr.com/photos/bwshado...7603195086367/

I took this shot in B&W , looking for critique on how to improve the impact and positioning of the photo.

eikin · 29th November 2007

it'll help if you can write something about what you're trying to achieve in the picture. if you need some tips you can refer here -> http://forums.clubsnap.com/showthread.php?t=275677

king2penn · 1st December 2007

I'm looking to highlight the contrast between the flower pot and the plant in the photo. Possibly make it into one of those grainy shot.

macson · 2nd December 2007

i like the picture, i think its extract. and i like the low yellowish saturation. However the bottom half of the picture is distracting, which mean, half of the picture composition is blur. maybe you can crop it to 1/3.

29th November 2007	#1
king2penn Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Singapore Posts: 713	Dead Rim Flower http://www.flickr.com/photos/bwshado...7603195086367/ I took this shot in B&W , looking for critique on how to improve the impact and positioning of the photo.

29th November 2007	#2
eikin Moderator Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: 東京 Tokyo Posts: 10,920	Re: Dead Rim Flower it'll help if you can write something about what you're trying to achieve in the picture. if you need some tips you can refer here -> http://forums.clubsnap.com/showthread.php?t=275677 __________________ APAD

1st December 2007	#3
king2penn Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Singapore Posts: 713	Re: Dead Rim Flower I'm looking to highlight the contrast between the flower pot and the plant in the photo. Possibly make it into one of those grainy shot.

2nd December 2007	#4
macson New Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 34	Re: Dead Rim Flower i like the picture, i think its extract. and i like the low yellowish saturation. However the bottom half of the picture is distracting, which mean, half of the picture composition is blur. maybe you can crop it to 1/3.