An isolated christmas night

scaredcloud · 27th November 2007

Was trying to create an isolated feel.
yet still find it messy and congested.
C&C welcome.

You may edit (PP) the photo to your liking to express your opinion.
Just wana make it nicer.

peepeedog · 27th November 2007

I get where your concept is coming from, and it's not too bad

some gripes:
1) picture is too small to be seen properly
2) too much sharpening/contrast. again, it's too small i can't really see
3) the giant screen is taking attention away from the magical lights

tribal.snake · 28th November 2007

pic is a bit too small but...

idea is there.
crop the top off at the big screen

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scaredcloud Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Tiny Red Dot Posts: 650	An isolated christmas night Was trying to create an isolated feel. yet still find it messy and congested. C&C welcome. You may edit (PP) the photo to your liking to express your opinion. Just wana make it nicer. __________________ Flickr!\|APAD\|Blog

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peepeedog Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 325	Re: An isolated christmas night I get where your concept is coming from, and it's not too bad some gripes: 1) picture is too small to be seen properly 2) too much sharpening/contrast. again, it's too small i can't really see 3) the giant screen is taking attention away from the magical lights __________________ photographs Nikon D200 \| Konica Hexar RF

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tribal.snake Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: west side! Posts: 685	Re: An isolated christmas night pic is a bit too small but... idea is there. crop the top off at the big screen __________________ The tribal.snake Gallery D200 \| 20mm f/4 \| 35mm f/1.4 \| 50mm f/1.2 \| 105mm f/1.8