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Old 27th November 2007   #1
wxwayne
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Hi, took this on a cloudy day at a lovely old church in the middle of town, like some C&C on it, about the composition, if the conversion to BW is ok and whether it is in focus. Thanks. Nikon D40x f5.6/ 1/25


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Old 27th November 2007   #2
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Default Re: Cherub

If you only want to show the Cherubim, a tighter crop will be better, the background is redundant. Crop to show only the grill background with rule of third should improve the pic....I would add a bit more contrast.

Just my personal opinion.

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Hi, took this on a cloudy day at a lovely old church in the middle of town, like some C&C on it, about the composition, if the conversion to BW is ok and whether it is in focus. Thanks. Nikon D40x f5.6/ 1/25

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Old 27th November 2007   #3
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Default Re: Cherub

tighter crop around the statue
more dof
if you could get up higher better, the ledge is blocking
or could try a more frontal view

not much to be said abt ur conversion, not much tones in the pic
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Old 27th November 2007   #4
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Originally Posted by lastboltnut View Post
If you only want to show the Cherubim, a tighter crop will be better, the background is redundant. Crop to show only the grill background with rule of third should improve the pic....I would add a bit more contrast.

Just my personal opinion.
Worked on the cropping.
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