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Old 26th November 2007   #1
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Hi everyone,
this is my picture, for C&C

location: Kranji War Memorial

I went there on a group outting.

when i first reached the place, there was a feeling there which i did not really understand. got off the bus, it came naturally to look at the site. I feel at peace looking at it.

did not shoot it first. walk around the place did not really want to shoot there. so went to the bus, look at the site again, felt the same feeling. took a few shots but could not get the feeling, finally when we are about to go, some how the sun came into the frame when i took the last frame.

I feel peace in this so it was it's name.




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Old 26th November 2007   #2
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Default Re: Peaceful

Honestly, What I see if just uninteresting trees and an overcast sky.. dun really feel a sense of peace. There really isn't any subject of interest in it that convey the feelings of peace.
How about the colored version? Maybe the colors in sky, grasspatch might add some life to the image.
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Old 26th November 2007   #3
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Originally Posted by m3lv1nh0 View Post
Honestly, What I see if just uninteresting trees and an overcast sky.. dun really feel a sense of peace. There really isn't any subject of interest in it that convey the feelings of peace.
How about the colored version? Maybe the colors in sky, grasspatch might add some life to the image.
thanks for the comment.
sorry but only version is a B&W version for this C&C.
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Old 26th November 2007   #4
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Default Re: Peaceful

this pic is too dark and tones are monotonous
if shot in color would have been interesting, but i am guess if in color, it might not carry the peaceful feeling u are after
pano shot woule be appropriate here.
o wait, u metered from the sky rite?
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Old 26th November 2007   #5
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Originally Posted by tribal.snake View Post
this pic is too dark and tones are monotonous
if shot in color would have been interesting, but i am guess if in color, it might not carry the peaceful feeling u are after
pano shot woule be appropriate here.
o wait, u metered from the sky rite?
sorry but how do you meter the sky for the right feeling?
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Old 26th November 2007   #6
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Underexposed (cos you most prob metered the sky), lack of contrast, uninteresting. Overall, B&W or color, does not work for me.
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Old 26th November 2007   #7
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try exposure bracketing.
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Old 27th November 2007   #8
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The pic looks a bit soft.....or may be its my old monitor.....did you shoot in RAW? If yes, this midway exposure is good for tone mapping.
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Old 27th November 2007   #9
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Originally Posted by lastboltnut View Post
The pic looks a bit soft.....or may be its my old monitor.....did you shoot in RAW? If yes, this midway exposure is good for tone mapping.
i think softness is due to the compression software i used. No i did not shoot in raw.
thanks for your comments
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Old 27th November 2007   #10
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Default Re: Peaceful

i thought that Fox's photo presents a good opportunity for simple PP so i presented a version of what it could be in my imagination.



this being done without permission from Fox, will take it down if required.
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Old 27th November 2007   #11
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Originally Posted by BernZ View Post
i thought that Fox's photo presents a good opportunity for simple PP so i presented a version of what it could be in my imagination.



this being done without permission from Fox, will take it down if required.
that is a interesting view. no problem here. thanks for the effort.
i think i will upload the pre-PP version. wait.
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Old 27th November 2007   #12
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this is the original
i was trying B&W, i guess i really suck at it :P
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