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Old 22nd November 2007   #1
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Title: Choices in life

The idea behind this is to use "All lighted" traffic light to represent the options we have in life...

Seeking comments and critiques on composition and the idea.

Thanks,
Melvin


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Old 22nd November 2007   #2
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hi,

you might want to consider using the CS gallery for linking of pictures http://gallery.clubsnap.com/

you can refer to this for the instructions http://forums.clubsnap.com/showthread.php?t=94574

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Old 22nd November 2007   #3
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thanks for pointing the right direction. image updated
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Old 24th November 2007   #4
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You used a black card? Take care of the exposures, the green is overexposed. My guess is that you exposed each different light for equal amount of time, but the green is more overexposed as the green light itself is much brighter than the rest.

Other than the copyright mark (too big), I like the composition of the subject and the chinese wordings alot!
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Originally Posted by tkbonz View Post
You used a black card? Take care of the exposures, the green is overexposed. My guess is that you exposed each different light for equal amount of time, but the green is more overexposed as the green light itself is much brighter than the rest.

Other than the copyright mark (too big), I like the composition of the subject and the chinese wordings alot!
actually, for green.. i think it works.. it's like saying "go"

but different people different shades, i guess

i like this picture, the idea is very creative. the only quibble i would have about this is that it is a teeny weeny bit too tight on the left, nothing that an appropriate "frame" (black , preferably) won't solve.
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Old 24th November 2007   #6
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Originally Posted by tkbonz View Post
You used a black card? Take care of the exposures, the green is overexposed. My guess is that you exposed each different light for equal amount of time, but the green is more overexposed as the green light itself is much brighter than the rest.

Other than the copyright mark (too big), I like the composition of the subject and the chinese wordings alot!
Hi tkbonz, i did not used a black card. the shutter started from green light,then amber, then red. noted the over exposed green light as well. haaa.. i realised the copright is a bit too as well.. am still looking around to do a signature...


Originally Posted by night86mare View Post
actually, for green.. i think it works.. it's like saying "go"

but different people different shades, i guess

i like this picture, the idea is very creative. the only quibble i would have about this is that it is a teeny weeny bit too tight on the left, nothing that an appropriate "frame" (black , preferably) won't solve.
thank you nigth86mare, you are right about the framing on the bottom left.however, not so nice to show a cluttered background, thus, i decided to give it a tight crop.however, i will take note next time on the framing.
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