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Old 20th November 2007   #1
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Default Does this processing work?

I was just playing around with Photoshop experimenting with different types of processing. I finally arrived with something that I like. Would like to get some comments on this kind of processing if it works for some magazine style kind...

I am using someone's else photo as an example, attaching the before and after here.

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Old 20th November 2007   #2
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NOOOOOOOOO....

i like the original better... the other 1 look like (touch wood and no offense) mortuary shoot.
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Old 20th November 2007   #3
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Which is b4 which is after? I assume left is b4, in this case before is better than after.....The one at right looks like vampire
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it might work for gothic themed shots

anything else.. no please
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Old 20th November 2007   #5
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Default Re: Does this processing work?

Looks more suited for themes involving darkness or something emotive.

Based on the model's facial expression, the unedited photo looks more suitable
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Old 20th November 2007   #6
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Maybe you should choose another photo to demonstrate the potential of this processing method.
For this picture, it doesn't work.
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Old 21st November 2007   #7
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Hi Zeckson, I think the PP mood is not appropriate for this shot and the lady skin tone has little megenta tone....very lack of life.

Mood aside, for the PP, think you have to watch out her hands....all the excessive shadow has made her arms look rough and "hairy" feel....no offense, just what I feel.
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Default Re: Does this processing work?

The only thing that worked for me was that the distracting background removed in black at the back.... the original skin tones is still more pleasing to the eyes... .. my take.
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yup... still like the original..

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Old 26th November 2007   #10
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Yea liked the original as well based on this context. Your PP might work if the theme is gothic or if you just wanted to isolate your subject
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Old 27th November 2007   #11
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The pic on the right makes the model's arm looks weird and the face scary.
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Old 28th November 2007   #12
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A big no, she looks dead and pale on the second photo...
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Old 28th November 2007   #13
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think TS not bothered about your replies already. since more than 1 week and no reply since...
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Old 28th November 2007   #14
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The right-hand-side photo would have made a good gothic themed shot... but the pink ruined it.
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critique is a two way process, and will only work when both sides put in the effort.

since TS has not responded for more than a week, thread will be closed.
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