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Old 19th November 2007   #1
sampan
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Default Faces - 2nd attempt to pose

Hi, this is my second attempt to pose this picture from comments. 1st post was too small. hopefully this time get it right.



This is a cadid shot of my colleague on board a bus, with the sun light through the window. I did some ps to darken right side of the pic.

any suggestion on how you would have done this shot or ps to make it better?

Thanks
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Old 19th November 2007   #2
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Default Re: Faces - 2nd attempt to pose

can i assume that you do not want to continue your first thread? http://forums.clubsnap.com/showthread.php?t=327519
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Old 19th November 2007   #3
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Originally Posted by eikin View Post
can i assume that you do not want to continue your first thread? http://forums.clubsnap.com/showthread.php?t=327519
ty
i just delete the 1st
the pic is 1st thread was too small, I was told.
sry, I newbie
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Old 20th November 2007   #4
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Default Re: Faces - 2nd attempt to pose

you can use CS's gallery for your picture posting actually, that'll be more convenient for embedding the picture into the thread. you can check out the instructions here -> http://forums.clubsnap.com/showthread.php?t=94574

you can find information about posting in critique corner in the stickies found on top of this section.

updated rules -> http://forums.clubsnap.com/showthread.php?t=273376
basic rules -> http://forums.clubsnap.com/showthread.php?t=139941
tip on short writeup -> http://forums.clubsnap.com/showthread.php?t=275677

hope they help
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Old 20th November 2007   #5
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thank you for the links.
I will try again.
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