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Old 11th November 2007   #1
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Default Steaming Hot... Live Band action at SMM-IBO Qualifying Round 2.

Full set can be seen here in the Ready Lights Action sub-forum...

Ok, I put this particular one up here in CC, because I want to hear if it looks "cheesy" I would have normally framed it differently, but since the guitarist happen to have his shirt off... and there was just abit of dryice coming out from behind him... I thought that including it in the frame would be good. To show the heat and energy emanating from their very entertaining live performance.



or ? Feel free to comment on other aspects too.
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Old 12th November 2007   #2
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Default Re: Steaming Hot... Live Band action at SMM-IBO Qualifying Round 2.

more dry-ice effect would be nice
crop away the top spotlight
get closer
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Default Re: Steaming Hot... Live Band action at SMM-IBO Qualifying Round 2.

More dry ice? Ok got it.

Mmm... maybe it's just me. But I like to include the lights somehow in my stage shots. Will try some tighter shots next time. I'm already right up at the edge of the stage.
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Default Re: Steaming Hot... Live Band action at SMM-IBO Qualifying Round 2.

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More dry ice? Ok got it.

Mmm... maybe it's just me. But I like to include the lights somehow in my stage shots. Will try some tighter shots next time. I'm already right up at the edge of the stage.
i agree. i like the lights there, gives it a more "concert" feel. just my humble opinion.
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Default Re: Steaming Hot... Live Band action at SMM-IBO Qualifying Round 2.

More dreamy dreamy look with the steam ... nice

But looks like the steam came out of his back
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Default Re: Steaming Hot... Live Band action at SMM-IBO Qualifying Round 2.

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But looks like the steam came out of his back
great! this was exactly the look i was trying to show

I was damn surprised to see steam rising from my buddies backs when I still frequently go into the jungles...

Although this just happens to be abit of dry ice effect.
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