Super Import Nights Model Shoot by Noob

[kleon]

Just took up photography for less than 3 months. 1st Attempt on car show shoot, took alot of pictures but only a handful acceptable. Pls C & C. Using D70, Mostly in ISO 400, f 4.5, 1 /60 sec, 70-210mm and a SB25 in A mode. Done slight PP on contrast and croping. (still learning photshop also)

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Enjoy the shooting spree..

[kleon]

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[wranger]

Bro,

I find that your #3, #4, #5 pics underexposed.

Your #2 pic is just nice.

[kleon]

Originally Posted by wranger Bro, I find that your #3, #4, #5 pics underexposed. Your #2 pic is just nice.

Thanks Bro, i also think likewise... #3,4 & 5 is rather under exposed. will work on it.

[skywalker28]

bro kleon, if I may add... your watermark is a little distracting....

[Yanzai]

bro, maybe you can try keeping eye contact with the models for pic 4 & 5

[Jesmun18]

i believe you are using direct flash... it makes your background very dark, also it is too harsh for the model..

[kleon]

Originally Posted by skywalker28 bro kleon, if I may add... your watermark is a little distracting....

Thanks bro.. will take note of it. thanks for pointing it out... really slip my mind on it.

[kleon]

Originally Posted by Yanzai bro, maybe you can try keeping eye contact with the models for pic 4 & 5

Yoz Bro, thanks for your comments ya.. will try my best ya.. BUT BUT, i not handsome enough ya... they dun wanna look @ me...

[kleon]

Originally Posted by Jesmun18 i believe you are using direct flash... it makes your background very dark, also it is too harsh for the model..

Noted.. Thanks bro... erm.. any recommendation on how to use it then??? cos still learning ya.