Looking back

dawson · 7th November 2007

this was taken some time back residing in my hdd. decided today to lose some
colour on it and to describe the fading memories and 2 good friends, rewinding
what it should be over the quay.

on second thought, maybe they are tourists and know nothing at all!

feel free to c&c.

cheers

sprintist · 7th November 2007

first uneasy feeling is that the weight is on the right side..everything sliding all along and tilting to the right. Composition is alright but tells nothing much besides two old man getting along basically

dawson · 7th November 2007

the weight to one side was due to my angle, shifted slightly down to avoid some
foliage that i don't want.

personally i'd think it lack of some act to generate interest.

CYNx3 · 8th November 2007

The picture is tilted and makes everything seems like it's moving to the right. Adding to that, the subject is also on the right, seems concentrated. Try making it straight in your next attempt (:

tribal.snake · 9th November 2007

watch the horizon
more of fullerton and less of merlion
how abt b&w??

7th November 2007	#1
dawson Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 134	Looking back this was taken some time back residing in my hdd. decided today to lose some colour on it and to describe the fading memories and 2 good friends, rewinding what it should be over the quay. on second thought, maybe they are tourists and know nothing at all! feel free to c&c. cheers __________________ rgds, dawson

7th November 2007	#2
sprintist Member/Tangshooter Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Singapore, western area Posts: 5,083	Re: Looking back first uneasy feeling is that the weight is on the right side..everything sliding all along and tilting to the right. Composition is alright but tells nothing much besides two old man getting along basically __________________ eyeamseeingthings . dreamstime

7th November 2007	#3
dawson Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 134	Re: Looking back the weight to one side was due to my angle, shifted slightly down to avoid some foliage that i don't want. personally i'd think it lack of some act to generate interest. __________________ rgds, dawson

8th November 2007	#4
CYNx3 Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: Sweetheart's heart Posts: 116	Re: Looking back The picture is tilted and makes everything seems like it's moving to the right. Adding to that, the subject is also on the right, seems concentrated. Try making it straight in your next attempt (:

9th November 2007	#5
tribal.snake Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: west side! Posts: 685	Re: Looking back watch the horizon more of fullerton and less of merlion how abt b&w??