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Thread: Looking back

  1. #1

    Default Looking back

    this was taken some time back residing in my hdd. decided today to lose some
    colour on it and to describe the fading memories and 2 good friends, rewinding
    what it should be over the quay.

    on second thought, maybe they are tourists and know nothing at all!



    feel free to c&c.

    cheers
    rgds,
    dawson

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    Default Re: Looking back

    first uneasy feeling is that the weight is on the right side..everything sliding all along and tilting to the right. Composition is alright but tells nothing much besides two old man getting along basically

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    Default Re: Looking back

    the weight to one side was due to my angle, shifted slightly down to avoid some
    foliage that i don't want.

    personally i'd think it lack of some act to generate interest.
    rgds,
    dawson

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    Default Re: Looking back

    The picture is tilted and makes everything seems like it's moving to the right. Adding to that, the subject is also on the right, seems concentrated. Try making it straight in your next attempt (:

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    Default Re: Looking back

    watch the horizon
    more of fullerton and less of merlion
    how abt b&w??

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