Boatwreck

lukman · 7th November 2007

hey, first time posting pictures here.
not really a wreckage, but its just a title.
need some comments from you guys if the composition and colour is ok.

tribal.snake · 7th November 2007

suggest to compose with the boat on the bottom right corner.
the sand there now is pretty redundant and boring.
not too sure abt the colors, bit suspect...
is ur wb off?

spazzer · 10th November 2007

As of what was mentioned by fellow cser tribal.snake yeah i totally agree with him try making use of the rules of thirds

and if possible if this pic was to be black and white the effect would be rather strong juz my 2 cents

NICE JOB THOUGH!

waileong · 10th November 2007

It's not a shipwreck.

Worry first about your subject and composition instead of colour. To an extent, WB is unimportant. If the picture is uninteresting, having it 100% white-balanced is no use.

wildstallion · 10th November 2007

I quite like it I must say, something about the whole colour and composition really works for me. I think its a cool shot!

Maybe crop it more into a panorama? The sand is way less interesting than the cool sky.

kgston · 10th November 2007

Personally the pic is fine by itself. WB is not really an issue here...as long as ur white ain't green, its fine. It has the potential to be a great pic...if u know what to do in photoshop. Firstly, it needs a crop and then bring the colours out then set the mood.

Raied · 15th November 2007

i like the dark clouds in the background, gives sorta of a "deserted" feeling which can compliment the theme of this picture.

maybe you couldve done more clouds and less sand. and the horizon slanted abit

7th November 2007	#1
lukman Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Tampines Posts: 93	Boatwreck hey, first time posting pictures here. not really a wreckage, but its just a title. need some comments from you guys if the composition and colour is ok. __________________ mohd lukman photoblog \| flickr \| multiply

7th November 2007	#2
tribal.snake Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: west side! Posts: 685	Re: Boatwreck suggest to compose with the boat on the bottom right corner. the sand there now is pretty redundant and boring. not too sure abt the colors, bit suspect... is ur wb off?

10th November 2007	#3
spazzer Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: BUKIT PANJANG Posts: 1,729	Re: Boatwreck As of what was mentioned by fellow cser tribal.snake yeah i totally agree with him try making use of the rules of thirds and if possible if this pic was to be black and white the effect would be rather strong juz my 2 cents NICE JOB THOUGH!

10th November 2007	#4
waileong Deregistered Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 2,597	Re: Boatwreck It's not a shipwreck. Worry first about your subject and composition instead of colour. To an extent, WB is unimportant. If the picture is uninteresting, having it 100% white-balanced is no use.

10th November 2007	#5
wildstallion Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Clementi, Singapore Posts: 2,837	Re: Boatwreck I quite like it I must say, something about the whole colour and composition really works for me. I think its a cool shot! Maybe crop it more into a panorama? The sand is way less interesting than the cool sky.

10th November 2007	#6
kgston Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 320	Re: Boatwreck Personally the pic is fine by itself. WB is not really an issue here...as long as ur white ain't green, its fine. It has the potential to be a great pic...if u know what to do in photoshop. Firstly, it needs a crop and then bring the colours out then set the mood. __________________ The best camera is one that does not get in your way...

15th November 2007	#7
Raied Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Clementi Posts: 320	Re: Boatwreck i like the dark clouds in the background, gives sorta of a "deserted" feeling which can compliment the theme of this picture. maybe you couldve done more clouds and less sand. and the horizon slanted abit