My Precious

Petf69 · 5th November 2007

Constructive comments welcome.

cheers!

tribal.snake · 6th November 2007

very nice pic with a lovely model
wonderful eyes

only issue is the border from the face to the hair, looks un-natural

Petf69 · 6th November 2007

Originally Posted by tribal.snake

very nice pic with a lovely model
wonderful eyes

only issue is the border from the face to the hair, looks un-natural

thanks for the feedback. are you referring to the crop being too tight on the upper left face?

tribal.snake · 6th November 2007

no, not that, i think the crop is fine, moreover the eyes is the main focus
is the left of her face, between the face and the hair. feels very un=natural.
and the hair, the texture differs from pt to pt.

Petf69 · 6th November 2007

Originally Posted by tribal.snake

no, not that, i think the crop is fine, moreover the eyes is the main focus
is the left of her face, between the face and the hair. feels very un=natural.
and the hair, the texture differs from pt to pt.

ic....may be because i painted over part of her forehead to reduce the dark shadows.....i guess i did not paint it evenly......

lastboltnut · 6th November 2007

Her beautiful left eye is blur/soft......I think its the DOF too shallow. Why is the hair blur nearer to her cheek then the outer part (extreme right of the pic)? May be due to DOF too?

Personally I would also PP away her blood vessels in her right eye, but just personal preference.

Nice pic.

Petf69 · 6th November 2007

tks for your feedback. you are right. the pic was taken with very low dof....i think around 1.8 or less.....yup. will PP the eye bit...

cheers!

nysheng · 6th November 2007

like the soft focus effect... though i personally feel that the composition is kinda awkward.. it feels tight(mayb due to the crop on the top) but somehow there's alot of space on the left and right.
maybe u would like to experiment wif different poses? i think it can be better =)

Petf69 · 7th November 2007

Originally Posted by nysheng

like the soft focus effect... though i personally feel that the composition is kinda awkward.. it feels tight(mayb due to the crop on the top) but somehow there's alot of space on the left and right.
maybe u would like to experiment wif different poses? i think it can be better =)

thanks for the feedback.

5th November 2007	#1
Petf69 Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Singapore Posts: 3,312	My Precious Constructive comments welcome. cheers!

6th November 2007	#2
tribal.snake Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: west side! Posts: 685	Re: My Precious very nice pic with a lovely model wonderful eyes only issue is the border from the face to the hair, looks un-natural

6th November 2007	#4
tribal.snake Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: west side! Posts: 685	Re: My Precious no, not that, i think the crop is fine, moreover the eyes is the main focus is the left of her face, between the face and the hair. feels very un=natural. and the hair, the texture differs from pt to pt.

6th November 2007	#6
lastboltnut Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Where the wind blows... Posts: 4,419	Re: My Precious Her beautiful left eye is blur/soft......I think its the DOF too shallow. Why is the hair blur nearer to her cheek then the outer part (extreme right of the pic)? May be due to DOF too? Personally I would also PP away her blood vessels in her right eye, but just personal preference. Nice pic. __________________ My Flickr Account

6th November 2007	#7
Petf69 Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Singapore Posts: 3,312	Re: My Precious tks for your feedback. you are right. the pic was taken with very low dof....i think around 1.8 or less.....yup. will PP the eye bit... cheers!

6th November 2007	#8
nysheng Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 346	Re: My Precious like the soft focus effect... though i personally feel that the composition is kinda awkward.. it feels tight(mayb due to the crop on the top) but somehow there's alot of space on the left and right. maybe u would like to experiment wif different poses? i think it can be better =) __________________ http://www.flickr.com/photos/nysheng