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Old 5th November 2007   #1
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Constructive comments welcome.

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Old 6th November 2007   #2
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very nice pic with a lovely model
wonderful eyes

only issue is the border from the face to the hair, looks un-natural
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Old 6th November 2007   #3
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Originally Posted by tribal.snake View Post
very nice pic with a lovely model
wonderful eyes

only issue is the border from the face to the hair, looks un-natural
thanks for the feedback. are you referring to the crop being too tight on the upper left face?
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Old 6th November 2007   #4
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no, not that, i think the crop is fine, moreover the eyes is the main focus
is the left of her face, between the face and the hair. feels very un=natural.
and the hair, the texture differs from pt to pt.
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Old 6th November 2007   #5
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Originally Posted by tribal.snake View Post
no, not that, i think the crop is fine, moreover the eyes is the main focus
is the left of her face, between the face and the hair. feels very un=natural.
and the hair, the texture differs from pt to pt.
ic....may be because i painted over part of her forehead to reduce the dark shadows.....i guess i did not paint it evenly......
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Old 6th November 2007   #6
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Her beautiful left eye is blur/soft......I think its the DOF too shallow. Why is the hair blur nearer to her cheek then the outer part (extreme right of the pic)? May be due to DOF too?

Personally I would also PP away her blood vessels in her right eye, but just personal preference.

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Old 6th November 2007   #7
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tks for your feedback. you are right. the pic was taken with very low dof....i think around 1.8 or less.....yup. will PP the eye bit...

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Old 6th November 2007   #8
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like the soft focus effect... though i personally feel that the composition is kinda awkward.. it feels tight(mayb due to the crop on the top) but somehow there's alot of space on the left and right.
maybe u would like to experiment wif different poses? i think it can be better =)
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Old 7th November 2007   #9
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Originally Posted by nysheng View Post
like the soft focus effect... though i personally feel that the composition is kinda awkward.. it feels tight(mayb due to the crop on the top) but somehow there's alot of space on the left and right.
maybe u would like to experiment wif different poses? i think it can be better =)
thanks for the feedback.
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