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    Constructive comments welcome.

    cheers!

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    very nice pic with a lovely model
    wonderful eyes

    only issue is the border from the face to the hair, looks un-natural

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    Quote Originally Posted by tribal.snake View Post
    very nice pic with a lovely model
    wonderful eyes

    only issue is the border from the face to the hair, looks un-natural
    thanks for the feedback. are you referring to the crop being too tight on the upper left face?

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    no, not that, i think the crop is fine, moreover the eyes is the main focus
    is the left of her face, between the face and the hair. feels very un=natural.
    and the hair, the texture differs from pt to pt.

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    Quote Originally Posted by tribal.snake View Post
    no, not that, i think the crop is fine, moreover the eyes is the main focus
    is the left of her face, between the face and the hair. feels very un=natural.
    and the hair, the texture differs from pt to pt.
    ic....may be because i painted over part of her forehead to reduce the dark shadows.....i guess i did not paint it evenly......

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    Her beautiful left eye is blur/soft......I think its the DOF too shallow. Why is the hair blur nearer to her cheek then the outer part (extreme right of the pic)? May be due to DOF too?

    Personally I would also PP away her blood vessels in her right eye, but just personal preference.

    Nice pic.

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    tks for your feedback. you are right. the pic was taken with very low dof....i think around 1.8 or less.....yup. will PP the eye bit...

    cheers!

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    like the soft focus effect... though i personally feel that the composition is kinda awkward.. it feels tight(mayb due to the crop on the top) but somehow there's alot of space on the left and right.
    maybe u would like to experiment wif different poses? i think it can be better =)

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    Quote Originally Posted by nysheng View Post
    like the soft focus effect... though i personally feel that the composition is kinda awkward.. it feels tight(mayb due to the crop on the top) but somehow there's alot of space on the left and right.
    maybe u would like to experiment wif different poses? i think it can be better =)
    thanks for the feedback.

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