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Old 5th November 2007   #1
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Default The Eye Of Joy



Picture is taken at Botanical Garden around late afternoon

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Old 5th November 2007   #2
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wow, very unique point of view.
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Old 5th November 2007   #3
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Originally Posted by shgfun View Post
wow, very unique point of view.
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Old 6th November 2007   #4
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nice pov.
if orangy sunset sky would be nicer..
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Old 6th November 2007   #5
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Nice concept, good eye!
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Old 6th November 2007   #6
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Thanks for the comments lastboltnut and tribal.snake... Will try to make it more orangy next time when i have the chance.
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Old 6th November 2007   #7
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hmmz... erm... a little write-up pls? cause although it's a unique view..but.. it feels kinda unbalanced.. a little heavy on the right side(kinda like being forced to look at it from a slant angle)
mayb u can tell us ur inspiration? i dun quite understand ur composition =)

picture seems a tad flat..like as if the underexposure was unintended.. mayb a bit more contrast?
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Old 6th November 2007   #8
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interesting concept. There is too much empty spaces all around the eye, the dark patches are too redundant. Go for tighter crop. This shot really caught my attention!
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Old 6th November 2007   #9
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very nice! aside for a more orange sky, if you could just chop those tree and make them shorter to give your subject more details,
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Old 7th November 2007   #10
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Nice concept but i hate the black patch
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Old 7th November 2007   #11
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interesting idea...
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