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Old 3rd May 2003   #1
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Personally, I like the way the branches extended out and upward - so full of life.........any comments are welcome.


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Feel that the top part.. where the leaves gather at a mass seem to be taking the attention away from the pic. a tighter crop with almost the same spacing for the sky might feel better.
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Is this better...??

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Second shot looks better. More balance.
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Second shot looks better. More balance.
Me too. The second shot is fantastic. Well done.

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Yes indeed the second shot look better.. feel that shoeing a bit more of the trunk might ??? hmmm....
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Quote:
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Second shot looks better. More balance.
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Me too. The second shot is fantastic. Well done.
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Yes indeed the second shot look better.. feel that shoeing a bit more of the trunk might ??? hmmm....
Thank you for all your comments. Greatly appreciated.

Bluestrike, when I was taking this picture I did consider puting in the trunk. But then after staring at the tree for a long time, I conclude by adding the trunk in the picture would not be exactly of what I had in mind (typical case of my "imagination" running wild..... ).

What I saw was, a human face (the "U" shape of the branches) with "raising" hair (top part of the branches). And in another case, there is a boy standing on the tree trying to climb up another branch...... May be my eyes are playing tricks on me .
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