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Old 23rd October 2007   #1
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Default my keyboard's a mess!

can someone piece it back for me?


just kidding! C&C very much welcomed!

cheerio!
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Old 24th October 2007   #2
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Originally Posted by liionel View Post
can someone piece it back for me?


just kidding! C&C very much welcomed!

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I like this shoot. You must have take a lot of effort to take apart the keyboard Is that your keyboard?
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i like the shot, the concept (i think i saw similar ones before though, but not saying that u're a copycat) n the mood/feeling evoked (messiness, etc.), but it seems on my uncalibrated monitor that u have quite a bit of blown out highlights...

still like it overall though..
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There's a greenish cast to the shadows... and the few hints of orange (colour of table underneath) distracts a bit.

It's an Apple's keyboard! Muahahaha!
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Old 24th October 2007   #5
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The shadows are a bit distracting. Color could be better. I like the composition.
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Old 24th October 2007   #6
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There's a greenish cast to the shadows... and the few hints of orange (colour of table underneath) distracts a bit.

It's an Apple's keyboard! Muahahaha!
yes its apple! and hmm, yeah just realised theres a greenish cast. must have been because my walls green. and yea theres my table below!

will take note next time. thanks!
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The shadows are a bit distracting. Color could be better. I like the composition.
thanks! will take note.
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I like this shoot. You must have take a lot of effort to take apart the keyboard Is that your keyboard?
nope! found it lying around downstairs and brought it up hehehe.
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Originally Posted by SolBadGuy View Post
i like the shot, the concept (i think i saw similar ones before though, but not saying that u're a copycat) n the mood/feeling evoked (messiness, etc.), but it seems on my uncalibrated monitor that u have quite a bit of blown out highlights...

still like it overall though..
hmm, i think i did fine with the highlights! but as others have said, my white balance is abit off.

thanks for your kind words!
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can someone piece it back for me?


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Whoa.... u killed ur keyboard?
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Whoa.... u killed ur keyboard?
nahh. found it lying downstairs!
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Old 24th October 2007   #12
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i did another version, this time i tried to remove the greenish cast, but now is there a bluish cast?

feedback is welcomed!
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Old 24th October 2007   #13
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I kinda prefer the first version.. looks X-processed.
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I kinda prefer the first version.. looks X-processed.
yeah i sorta agree still. 1st version more my style. thanks for comments!
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Old 25th October 2007   #15
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yup i prefer the 1st one too..
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yup i prefer the 1st one too..
mmm i guess the 2nd version was tad too ordinary.. thanks for your feedback!
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Old 25th October 2007   #17
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Try Hitting lights on it. Try Purple? Then you WB back and see the effect. ;-p
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Old 25th October 2007   #18
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Try Hitting lights on it. Try Purple? Then you WB back and see the effect. ;-p
eh thats a really interesting idea! may try sometime soon!
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Hehe, oops, I just let a tip out of the bag. Ok lah, what are forums for. ;-p
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Old 25th October 2007   #20
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Hehe, oops, I just let a tip out of the bag. Ok lah, what are forums for. ;-p
ehhhh hahahaha. yesss forums are for sharing! and sharing is caring.
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