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    Default A pic a friend once took...

    He name this "A view outside my father's car".

    http://www.flickr.com/photos/9705667@N02/1551784083/

    He took this with a normal camera while travelling in his dad's car and did some edits in photoshop.
    He said he wants to show a sense of melancholy in this picture.
    He knows nothing about photography and.... ya. That's all.

    I personally feels that the photo is rather well composed but the lamp post in the foreground is somehow distracting.

    C&C are welcome. Thanks alot
    Last edited by Werty; 12th October 2007 at 10:02 PM.

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    Default Re: A pic a friend once took...

    Help you with the image.

    I would say the lamp post is distracting,you have a coloured version for this?
    Last edited by zaxh81; 12th October 2007 at 10:03 PM.

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    Default Re: A pic a friend once took...

    Thanx alot zaxh81!

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    Default Re: A pic a friend once took...

    hi Werty, did you get permission from your friend to post the picture up for critique?

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    ya... he ask me to post de. lol

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    Any comments on my friend's photo? He quite eager to get some comments. lol. thanx ppl

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    Default Re: A pic a friend once took...

    The sky looks overexposed. and lighten up the ground a bit more for details....If really overexposed sky (got colour version?) then BW seems better.

    Just me opinion.

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    Hmm, i agree the sky looks overexposed and the lamp post on the left is kinda distracting (and looks noisy). Maybe a crop on the left will be good. But kinda like the feel. Its gives me a feel of the vastness that we normally get from watching american movies. (oh, i never been to america, so only can feel from movie).Also, watch the tilt. My 10 cents of RMB~

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    my fren said he lasso the middle part and overexposed it... so it is a purpose overexposure.. he try to have a contrast in the picture... btw, thanx for the comments

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