red among white

togu · 29th April 2003

Hi there,

Interesting idea you have.

Hrm, personally I'll prefer to place the subject more towards the top left corner, cos of the red onion, and give some space for the bottom. On top of that, was thinking if you place it that way, the shadows wouldn't be cut off.

However, that's just my personal perception. If you prefer the current composition, you might want to crop of the little shade at the top left corner.

denizenx · 29th April 2003

here's another utterly generic but probably applicable

suggestion:
-use more space. let the bunch take up about 1/9 of the frame.
-use less space, zoom in until all the cloves are cut off about 1/4 at the sides...

28th April 2003	#1
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denizenx Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: L2TPYSG Posts: 4,514	here's another utterly generic but probably applicable suggestion: -use more space. let the bunch take up about 1/9 of the frame. -use less space, zoom in until all the cloves are cut off about 1/4 at the sides... __________________ "I'm... dreaming... of a wide... angle~ Just like the ones I used to know~"

29th April 2003	#2
togu Moderator Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: ToFusland Posts: 5,563	Hi there, Interesting idea you have. Hrm, personally I'll prefer to place the subject more towards the top left corner, cos of the red onion, and give some space for the bottom. On top of that, was thinking if you place it that way, the shadows wouldn't be cut off. However, that's just my personal perception. If you prefer the current composition, you might want to crop of the little shade at the top left corner.