Floral shots 2

SAllan · 18th September 2007

Hi everyone, a few more shots to share. C & C most welcome.

2ichigo2 · 18th September 2007

To me,

#1 - find the composition weird.. Not sure what u want to bring out
#2 - maybe u can place e subject in the center. If you wanna use the rules of third, maybe u can try taking landscape placing e subject in off center towards left.
#5 - looks messy.. don know what u wan to bring out also

Just sharing some of my noob point of view

spheredome · 18th September 2007

The vision thru the camera is not the same as what we see from our eyes; one area is size of the scene. If the whisker flowers were taken at closer range and levelled looks better.

night86mare · 18th September 2007

all the photos here are messy and cluttered
try working harder at composing
if you must have mess and clutter, find some form of "order" in it and perhaps others may find it easier to appreciate the photo

otherwise, starting off with KISS
keeping it simple and sweet
is much easier, i find

SAllan · 18th September 2007

Thank you so much for all your kind feedbacks. I will certainly take note of all your feedbacks, do continue to give me your honest opinion so that I can learn something from you guys. Cheers

18th September 2007	#3
spheredome Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: AMK Posts: 878	Re: Floral shots 2 The vision thru the camera is not the same as what we see from our eyes; one area is size of the scene. If the whisker flowers were taken at closer range and levelled looks better.

18th September 2007	#4
night86mare Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: in your mind Posts: 19,307	Re: Floral shots 2 all the photos here are messy and cluttered try working harder at composing if you must have mess and clutter, find some form of "order" in it and perhaps others may find it easier to appreciate the photo otherwise, starting off with KISS keeping it simple and sweet is much easier, i find __________________ Gallery \| Dreamscapes 09 Pentaxian 伪君子之所以更可憎

18th September 2007	#1
SAllan Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 65	Floral shots 2 Hi everyone, a few more shots to share. C & C most welcome.

18th September 2007	#2
2ichigo2 Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: In the East Posts: 427	Re: Floral shots 2 To me, #1 - find the composition weird.. Not sure what u want to bring out #2 - maybe u can place e subject in the center. If you wanna use the rules of third, maybe u can try taking landscape placing e subject in off center towards left. #5 - looks messy.. don know what u wan to bring out also Just sharing some of my noob point of view __________________ http://2ichigo2.multiply.com - Canon 400D User - Everyone was once a Noob

18th September 2007	#5
SAllan Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 65	Re: Floral shots 2 Thank you so much for all your kind feedbacks. I will certainly take note of all your feedbacks, do continue to give me your honest opinion so that I can learn something from you guys. Cheers Last edited by SAllan; 18th September 2007 at 04:05 PM.