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    Default Bleak.

    Hi everyone Im new here, so forgive me if I fail to abide by the guidelines (although Ill try my best).

    This shot was taken on a cloudy evening. Personally, I was attempting to convey a sense of forlorn and darkness through this shot.
    The subject is erm, everything beyond the black, natural 'frame', I guess. I literally committed a 'point-and-shoot' when taking it...
    Methinks this is trash, but its the best of what I have. My gallery is sad );
    Any feedback on whether any emotion is evoked is greatly appreciated though,
    Along with any on photographic composition...

    Camera: Leica V-LUX 1
    Exposure: 0.005 sec (1/200)
    Aperture: f/4.5
    Focal Length: 7.4 mm
    ISO Speed: 400

    Thank you for reading. (:
    Last edited by Junyi-; 9th September 2007 at 09:36 PM.

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    Default Re: Bleak.

    What is your thoughts on the foreground? What are they related to the background? IMHO, I can't comprehend your theme.

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    Member king2penn's Avatar
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    Default Re: Bleak.

    Hi, Junyi... Welcome to clubsnap... In ur post u mentioned about conveying a sense of forlorn and darkness through ur shot. The photo is not too badly done, but it could be improved perhaps by giving a more dramatic prespective and by isolating a single subject in the shot, such as the chair. The framing emcompasses far too many subjects and it would be better to just concentrate on a few...

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    Default Re: Bleak.

    Heh no idea. Like I said, it was literally point and shoot...

    Yeah Ill keep the single subject in mind next time, thank you very much...
    I'll see you on the Dark side of the Moon...

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    Default Re: Bleak.

    Location not very correct in the first place. Hence the bleak appearance is insufficient.


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