Frankly speaking, this series of photographs is not encouraged to be post in the forum.
For the simplest reason, this does not help the members to improve their photographic skills.
This is neither event coverage nor model shoot. You cannot control the background as u do not rent the place and the showgirls are just doing charity when they pose for you. If you are covering for magazine/press I got nothing to say, this is your job. But here! What are you trying to show?
Yes! you can shoot this type of photo, but please keep it to yourself. You can achieve more than that! I seen pretty good picture from you.
I am sorry if I offended you in anyway. But I do not wish this culture to continue in this forum.