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Old 5th September 2007   #1
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took this little bugger in ubin..
P&P welcome..
1. how to achieve a better composition (esp the background)
2. i just wanted to achieve sharpness and the scales definition on the lizzy
3. it's HOT.. it's ubin..
4. i think the picture is sharp, and it's lacking something.. i can't point my finger at what it is.. lack of composition?


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Old 5th September 2007   #2
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Very nice colour!
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Old 5th September 2007   #3
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Originally Posted by winnyyap View Post
Very nice colour!
thanks dearie..
u have a very nice bloggie too.. and i love the picture of the tulip there..

cheers,
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Nice shot. Nice colour.
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sharp and pretty colours!

the more the pity in the background, isn't entirely clean
and not sure if you did some cloning or what, but the bottom left corner looks pretty funny like it has been cloned
i did a quick job, doesn't look perfect to me even though it was ok on screen, possibly due to jpg compression artefacts
also blurred the bg a bit more, let me know if you want it down, sorry had to remove your signatures and framing to make the cloning easier

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Old 5th September 2007   #6
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nice image and i think it doesnt lack anything honestly nice bg too
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Old 5th September 2007   #7
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whoa, the colours are superb!

i think this picture's perfect the way it is. clean and simple. plus, the backgrounds all nice and soft.

great shot!

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wah the eye so focus.
it's the btm left hand corner that is distracting.
the sudden brown coming out of no where distracts the eyes from making the subject stand out.
but overall, very CHIO shot
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Old 6th September 2007   #9
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Originally Posted by Bored Dad View Post
Nice shot. Nice colour.
*blushes*
thank you..
the lizzy's got very nice colours.. so.. thankiew Lizzy..

Originally Posted by night86mare View Post
sharp and pretty colours!
also blurred the bg a bit more, let me know if you want it down, sorry had to remove your signatures and framing to make the cloning easier

hey dude.. ur cloning works wonder! now the picture actually looks much cleaner and FOCUS.. thanks bud!

Originally Posted by spazzer View Post
nice image and i think it doesnt lack anything honestly nice bg too
thanks.. *smiles*
Originally Posted by with_brokenwings View Post
whoa, the colours are superb!

i think this picture's perfect the way it is. clean and simple. plus, the backgrounds all nice and soft.

great shot!

cheers!
thank you for ur kind words..

Originally Posted by Bosty View Post
wah the eye so focus.
it's the btm left hand corner that is distracting.
the sudden brown coming out of no where distracts the eyes from making the subject stand out.
but overall, very CHIO shot
what's btm? hehe.. if you are referring to the branch below, that's the branch tt's off focus.. hehe..
thanks for your comments..
i love the eyes too..

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Old 6th September 2007   #10
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great moment + great colours!
hehe good eye contact with the lizard too...
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Originally Posted by graphicz View Post
great moment + great colours!
hehe good eye contact with the lizard too...
thanks for your kind comment..
the lizzy was staring at me like i'm some kinda weirdo..

tt'd possibly explain the 'eye contact' with it..
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i like the lizzy's eyes, so sharp so clear
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Originally Posted by IONSOON View Post
i like the lizzy's eyes, so sharp so clear
i keep 'talking' to the lizzy while shooting.. it somehow got it's attention..

thanks for the comments!
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Old 17th September 2007   #14
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Very crisp shot sis J . The color is nice too.

IMO, the background is not "that" distracting.
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Nice capture
but would be even nicer if could see the front paw too
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Old 18th September 2007   #16
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Originally Posted by jpgutierrez18 View Post
Very crisp shot sis J . The color is nice too.

IMO, the background is not "that" distracting.
thanks bro j! hehehe

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Nice capture
but would be even nicer if could see the front paw too
hi Redsun, thanks for ur comments.. hehe..
here's something for ya..


hehe.. it took me a while to figure how to pp a paw in with the same color worx..
*giggles*

hope u'll like the new paw! ehheheheh
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Nice paw!!
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