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Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Singapore
Posts: 386
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![]() This photo was taken but the model was not aware of it. . obviously she didn't because her eyes were closed. But the reason why they were closed was because of the fan. She was waiting until i was ready before she would open her eyes for the proper shot. This shot is done in a mini studio. In photoshop i played around with the channels and figured this would be a very nice black and white photo. I have other shots in colour which i wont post here. Maybe under p and p later ![]() Last edited by Rheo; 2nd September 2007 at 02:29 AM. |
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Senior Member
Join Date: Feb 2005
Location: East
Posts: 10,962
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Nice magical moment there...
But sadly, her left bra/bikini strap is kinda distracting there and it would have been better with a more balanced cleavage of both left and right in view. The back of her hand seems a lil over too. ![]() |
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Join Date: Jun 2006
Posts: 116
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There is distraction of the lower part of your composition. Overall, it is mis-themed.
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