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Old 31st August 2007   #1
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Took some random shots at Vivo

Does picture 1 work ? Any comment for the PP on picture 1 ? Thanks in advance !



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Old 1st September 2007   #2
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Picture 1 works to some extend, I think you wanted to project the romantic couple right? But the PP work somewhat changes the mood as if they are at the end of their relationship.. In this aspect, I think the photo should remain at colour but add some vignetting in.

Also, the statue on the left is drawing some distraction away from the couple, and somewhat doesn't blend in the mood...

To me personally, the shot is basically well taken, but can re-consider the PP work.

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Old 1st September 2007   #3
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Thanks ! now that you mentioned it ... The statue indeed took some attention away from the couple...
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i like the dramtic effect on pic 2
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i like the dramtic effect on pic 2
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Thanks ! now that you mentioned it ... The statue indeed took some attention away from the couple...
Actually, I kinda like the 'story' with the statue in the pic: loving couple, lonely statue. Kinda boring without it.
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i like picture 2, well done!
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Actually, I kinda like the 'story' with the statue in the pic: loving couple, lonely statue. Kinda boring without it.
haha, i interpreted it as "statue trying not to be kaypoh and looking away, whilst couple engages in intimate act"
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Originally Posted by danmic View Post
Actually, I kinda like the 'story' with the statue in the pic: loving couple, lonely statue. Kinda boring without it.
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i like picture 2, well done!
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haha, i interpreted it as "statue trying not to be kaypoh and looking away, whilst couple engages in intimate act"
thanks for viewing
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#2 remind me of "stardust memories"
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Old 9th September 2007   #11
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Originally Posted by justinification View Post
haha, i interpreted it as "statue trying not to be kaypoh and looking away, whilst couple engages in intimate act"
the problem with the statue is that it points out of the picture
thereby drawing attention away from the couple, that is right
if it was actually looking at the couple
or did not have a nose, it might have worked better

i like the second photo! =)
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I like picture 1 though. Its a cute & interesting composition!
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