ClubSNAP Photography Forums

Go Back   ClubSNAP Photography Forums > Photo Galleries > Critique Corner

Notices

Critique Corner Post your image in here to get serious and honest feedback from fellow photographers. Please read FAQ before posting.


 
Thread Tools
Old 30th August 2007   #1
kel1ng
Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2007
Posts: 176
Default Flower

Was at at Chua Chu Kang orchid nursery last Saturday. Was trying out some macro shots on flowers on bright daylight........as i am still relatively new in photography, i am posting a macro shot and asking for advises on this shot to improve myself........many, many thanks in advance......

Shot taken on a canon S5IS under super macro mode.
1/640 f4.0 ISO:80 WB:auto

Last edited by kel1ng; 30th August 2007 at 08:45 PM.
kel1ng is offline  
Old 31st August 2007   #2
2.8photography
Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2007
Posts: 718
Default Re: Flower

sry, but i really dont see an outstanding focal point in your pic. you could have focused on only one of the flowers, thus eliminating other distractions. (i dont think you could do that this close on your PnS). otherwise, the DOF is nice and sharp, and the colours not too bad
2.8photography is offline  
Old 31st August 2007   #3
reaper3075
Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: Jurong West
Posts: 496
Default Re: Flower

Originally Posted by 2.8photography View Post
sry, but i really dont see an outstanding focal point in your pic. you could have focused on only one of the flowers, thus eliminating other distractions. (i dont think you could do that this close on your PnS). otherwise, the DOF is nice and sharp, and the colours not too bad
he's using a prosumer.. not a PnS..

anyway ur rite.. should have went closer... background is messy and distracting.
__________________
You Need Some Madness In Life To Stay Sane
http://emuted.multiply.com
reaper3075 is offline  
Sponsored Link
Old 31st August 2007   #4
grumpy
Member
 
Join Date: Jun 2006
Posts: 1,506
Default Re: Flower

Too many distracting elements. If the center flower is your main subject, maybe cropping it during post processing may help.
grumpy is offline  
Old 1st September 2007   #5
yehosaphat
Senior Member
 
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: North
Posts: 2,605
Default Re: Flower

Pic is too distracting with the messy background... use a smaller f stop! Keep shooting
__________________
Canon 5D mkII|24-105mm F4 IS L|70-200mm F4 IS L|580EX|and more coming! :P
yehosaphat is offline  
Old 1st September 2007   #6
kel1ng
Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2007
Posts: 176
Default Re: Flower

Thanks to all the advice given......going closer to the flower will be a bit difficult as my lens was already about 2cm away from it....the size of each flower is about less then a cm in diameter......maybe will try to crop the pic n see how.....will also try smaller f stop to see whether i could isolate this flower from the rest......do not really noe the limitation of the S5IS......will keep on shooting......again:many, many thanks again for all the good advice.......by the way just a pic to show u guys how the actual stalk of flower looks like(I hope the moderators here won't mind)


by posting this pic i hope that bros or sis here could give me more suggestions to improve my shots............

Last edited by kel1ng; 1st September 2007 at 11:11 AM.
kel1ng is offline  
Closed Thread

Bookmarks

Thread Tools

Forum Jump


All times are GMT +8. The time now is 08:54 AM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.7.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2009, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Copyright © 2002 - 2009 ClubSNAP.com
Page generated in 0.06388 seconds with 7 queries