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Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 275
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![]() Took at Laboudor Park on Saturday please comment, Thanks ![]() |
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Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: Bukit Timah / Melbourne CBD
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The lighting is flat(read - not ideal) and it isn't really an interesting composition either.
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Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: 東京 Tokyo
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as per posting guidelines http://forums.clubsnap.org/showthread.php?t=273376
please include a short writeup. thanks
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Join Date: Jan 2007
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You mean half the seawall is lighted and the other is not? Will look out for that when i take next time! Thanks
Interesting wise I was trying to catch the wave when is splashes, produces a nice effect of water in mid air i guess personal prefrence, keep it commin! |
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Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 275
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Opps really sorry!
1. Well the general composure and everything else you think is wrong with the photo! 2. Show the power of waves! (juz jokin!) 3. Trying to get a nice shot when the waves hit the shore at the higest point in midair 4. Love this shot of the water droplets hangin in the air like someone stoped time ![]() |
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Join Date: Dec 2004
Posts: 385
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The one thing that this has, is the strong diagonal line across the picture. However, it doesn't have the impact as how you'd like to show the wave droplets in the air. In most cases, it's just a question of being in the right place at the right time with the right equipment for the right audience. In this case, i don't think you'll be able to create any impact at all considering the size of the waves. But i might try zooming in closer to the waves to create a more abstract feel and to play with the perceived magnitude of the waves.
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Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Singapore, western area
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Timings are important to get good shots but sometimes we can only be there at a certain times of course and sometimes the good light don't come too. You can try early morning or early evenings when the strong lights come out casting shadows or say, sunrise/sunset which can cause water to reflect and glitter in those golden glows. Like said earlier, timing is key, but the light on that day is unpredictable. ![]() |
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