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Old 22nd August 2007   #1
bernadette
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Default Plants

A random photo shot by my phone's camera.
Hmm thought i could snap it this way to emphasise the bright red and yellow colour in contrast to the others.
Kinda wanted to make it stand out from everything else. Comments?


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Old 22nd August 2007   #2
Michael
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Default Re: Plants

oh girl, this is really random....
so the plant is the main focus, but it hangs out of the frame and a thick trunk is going right through it, the background is wild...
if you would not have told us that you want to show the bright colours of the flower then i would not have guessed what this picture is about....

Focus!! this is missing, focus is what you need to find
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