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Old 19th August 2007   #1
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Default A fisherman & his Commorant

Hi! I hope it's correct to be posted in this column



This was taken during my last trip in china.

Appreciate your comments for improvement

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Old 19th August 2007   #2
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Maybe should be in Land/City-scapes and Travel.

Nice!

A couple of things.....

A bit over-sharpened.
Crop could be better.
2nd bird mostly blocked by the man's head.
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Old 19th August 2007   #3
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Thank you r52lanc for your comments
This fisherman just came to pose for this shot that day.
We thank and paying him some monies.
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Old 19th August 2007   #4
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Looks fine here.

That's a portrait of a man in his environment ... and he struck a pose for the photographer.

Isn't this the 'Portraits and Poses' section?
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Old 19th August 2007   #5
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Default Re: A fisherman & his Commorant

Originally Posted by r52lanc View Post
Maybe should be in Land/City-scapes and Travel.

Nice!

A couple of things.....

A bit over-sharpened.
Crop could be better.
2nd bird mostly blocked by the man's head.
Yap agree. Too sharp for my liking.

Boken not strong enough here. Doesnt allow the subject to stand out as much as it should.

Other than that, good eye for shooting mate
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I would crop off more of the bottom to remove the slanted line on the right....
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Old 25th August 2007   #7
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Thank Dream Merchant, g-khoo & zac08 for your comments.
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