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With the recent spate of threads appearing in the forums about the all happening NDP. I was thinking, had we ever really thought where we come from, what could we be today. Dug out this photo, titled: Soul Searching. Taken in suntec city convention hall and saw this boy reading the papers deep in thought. Was wondering if this pic had worked its fullest effect, in making ppl think, the search of the origin in us.
![]() I thought a bigger pic would make a stronger statement. Click here Please comment, for thats the only way i can improve.
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Has this picture reali fare that badly that there are no comments?
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I pefer it tilt the other way that the person is straight rather than the words...
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meaning you wan the words to have more DOF?
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nope..
i think he means what i feel too.. that the picture should be rotated 90 degrees. i find myself looking at the words more than the boy and have to turn my headsideways to read
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Got to ask yourself whether the pic got imbalance or not. felt like the reader is falling asleep!
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hmmm, meaning such genre of pics would be best if be taken in landscape? And prob should show more eyes of the reader? As the reader was not sleeping but in very deep reading of the papers.
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Eh. does have some meaning.
but i dun like it that when the first thing i saw the photo i tilt my head >.< it looks like the photo could be in landscape too instead of potrait |
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Have you considered a over the shoulder shot?
Think it just might work. |
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