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10th August 2007
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New Member
Join Date: Apr 2007
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NDP preview; portraits in line.
 Exposure: 0.017 sec (1/60) Aperture: f/6.3 Focal Length: 50 mm Exposure: 0.017 sec (1/60) Aperture: f/6.3 Focal Length: 50 mm a couple i shot at the NDP Preview.. with a 350D, 50mmf1.8II. at ISO 200, on Av. post processed (colors) in adobe lightroom just wondering how the people react to my photos, i'm particularly interested in shooting human subjects.. and was wondering how i can improve technically. and i feel the guys in the red/orange stripes just ruin the photo.. i'd crop, but i think it'll be way too tight. thanks. Last edited by eikin; 12th August 2007 at 09:56 AM. Reason: extra image removed as per guidelines |
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13th August 2007
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Loyang
Posts: 2,233
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Re: NDP preview; portraits in line.
hi,
personnally i feel you should have used a larger aperture to create a more shallow depth of field to brings out the feel of the pic.... the first guy and the background should have been more blurred... colour and contrast is great.... its just how i feel... :P Last edited by blurboiboi; 13th August 2007 at 07:17 AM. |
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15th August 2007
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New Member
Join Date: Apr 2007
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Re: NDP preview; portraits in line.
yeah, i completely understand what you mean.. thanks for the tip..
i recognize it after looking closely at the photo again. thanks! |
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19th August 2007
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Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Posts: 376
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Re: NDP preview; portraits in line.
I would crop out the left hand side to a degree. Keeping the subject more prominent
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