Birds of JBP... First timer at birding. Critique please :)

Yatlapball · 9th August 2007

My very first venture into shooting birds... so goto JBP first. Maybe next shoot then try my hand at birds in the wild.

Hope for some of the old-hands at birding to give me some bashing

so that I can improve.

dominator · 10th August 2007

Me not old hand......
#2 not bad. #3 the blue color I think is off. Overall, all seem a bit over.

Harlequin · 10th August 2007

Dark exposure, framing and composition, dark backgrounds, no eye contact.

The leg tags doesn't really work for me (wild birds preferred).

Take a look at some of my postings to see examples.

Cheers mate.

Yatlapball · 10th August 2007

Got it. Thanks

Will try to improve on the next shoot (and shoot with a flash too)

psychobiologist · 10th August 2007

i like the first shot

if the area around the eye a bit more exposed would be very nice

the rest of the birds look a bit sad to me, i guess its the captivity

9th August 2007	#1
Yatlapball Senior Member Join Date: May 2006 Location: Volcano Land Posts: 2,335	Birds of JBP... First timer at birding. Critique please :) My very first venture into shooting birds... so goto JBP first. Maybe next shoot then try my hand at birds in the wild. Hope for some of the old-hands at birding to give me some bashing so that I can improve. __________________ my PBase(new)

10th August 2007	#4
Yatlapball Senior Member Join Date: May 2006 Location: Volcano Land Posts: 2,335	Re: Birds of JBP... First timer at birding. Critique please :) Got it. Thanks Will try to improve on the next shoot (and shoot with a flash too) __________________ my PBase(new)

10th August 2007	#5
psychobiologist Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 2,267	Re: Birds of JBP... First timer at birding. Critique please :) i like the first shot if the area around the eye a bit more exposed would be very nice the rest of the birds look a bit sad to me, i guess its the captivity __________________ chezburgr i can haz?

10th August 2007	#2
dominator Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Amazon Forest Posts: 1,630	Re: Birds of JBP... First timer at birding. Critique please :) Me not old hand...... #2 not bad. #3 the blue color I think is off. Overall, all seem a bit over. __________________ Cleanse your thoughts, not by the foods you eat.

10th August 2007	#3
Harlequin Member Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: East of Singapore Posts: 1,662	Re: Birds of JBP... First timer at birding. Critique please :) Dark exposure, framing and composition, dark backgrounds, no eye contact. The leg tags doesn't really work for me (wild birds preferred). Take a look at some of my postings to see examples. Cheers mate.