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Old 9th August 2007   #1
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Default Haji Lane

Took this at Haji Lane last week.

I just managed to take one shot and then a truck drove and parked in front of me. But I like the chair and the cushions..

can u tell me what u feel when u saw these pics?



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Old 9th August 2007   #2
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To TS, you need to read and follow the guidelines.
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To TS, you need to read and follow the guidelines.
thanks! edited my post
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Originally Posted by at8851 View Post
thanks! edited my post
one image per thread.
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first shot....the contrast doesnt do it for me. but from a technical prespective, its not bad. i'd clone out the the red thing on the top right...crop out the white thing on the left... i wouldnt have cropped the top too much (if u cropped it at all?) the hanger looks like it's just floating there and if i could reshoot, i'd get rid of the black chairs

i like the 2nd pic, i'd crop out that pipe on the left, clone/crop out that white thing on the top. and possibly undersaturate everything except the chair just a tad.
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Originally Posted by zaxh81 View Post
one image per thread.
sorry.. edited again
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