After the rain

TrailSeeker · 30th July 2007

feimao07 · 30th July 2007

#3 is

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burnin' done to top-left n bottom-right? nice!

siongsing · 30th July 2007

Hi Trailseeker,

#1 -
What is the subject? The waterdop? If so, hiding it behind the leaf may be a good idea, but execution is less than good.... the brown leaf edge spoils it, becoz it draws the eye away from the subject, which is the waterdrop after the rain.

#2 -
The leaf is blown by almost negligible amounts.

#3 -
Good idea, but seems like no focus here? The torn leaf scrap on the larger leaf?
If so, it doesn't have much to do with After The Rain, does it?

#4 -
No subject. Blown out.

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siongsing Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 78	Re: After the rain Hi Trailseeker, #1 - What is the subject? The waterdop? If so, hiding it behind the leaf may be a good idea, but execution is less than good.... the brown leaf edge spoils it, becoz it draws the eye away from the subject, which is the waterdrop after the rain. #2 - The leaf is blown by almost negligible amounts. #3 - Good idea, but seems like no focus here? The torn leaf scrap on the larger leaf? If so, it doesn't have much to do with After The Rain, does it? #4 - No subject. Blown out. __________________ My Humble-Loft Last edited by siongsing; 30th July 2007 at 09:30 PM.