Portfolio: ReVisited

Wolfgang · 13th April 2003

Sunset

Heaven Bound

Bond

Morning Dew

Port & the City

SniperD · 13th April 2003

your "heaven bound" appeals to me alot... very strange feel to it but the symmetry and colour tones are beautiful

jasphotography · 16th April 2003

Pic 1 is no no for me, nothing looks impressive or exceptional to me, the sea or the sky. I have seen better sea and better sky! Good try, wolfgang...

The remaining pics however get my adrenaline pumped up a little.

Pic 2: When I saw this, I always wonder what's that "thing" at the bottom which severed the parallel roads to a stop! It kept me guessing...

Nonetheless, very interesteing composition but somehow I don't think it is incredibly sharp.

Pic 3: My favourite of all, the grain, the black & white and all.

Pic 4: The dew is lovely but the background is not, unfortunately you can't do anything about it. But hey, the spider can!

The top right highlight is no excuse, wolfgang...

Even if you can't move or change the background, you can always do a little bit of "gardening". The protruding grass at the bottom right "third" needs scissoring.

Pic 5: Very interesting viewpoint too but again not sharp!!! The wind must be strong up there ehhh or your tripod must be getting weaker! Or both!

tomshen · 16th April 2003

Agreed the 3rd caught my eyes, but the rest...

Keep shooting.

nuts · 18th April 2003

Actually, didn't really have much to comment/critique, but the 3rd pic is such a winner I had to say something. And since this is the Portfolio section, I had to say something on the rest as well, so here goes ...

Pic 1 & 5 :
Seems to be quite ordinary shots, so no real wow! factor here...

Pic 2 :
Very interesting composition! Overall lighting is quite well captured. The perspective is so engaging, I think any minor faults will be easily overlooked!

Pic 3 :
Did I mention this is a winner? Ok, to nitpick, the top may be a little tight, but really, the composition, the expressions, the b/w, the grain.., this is a wow!

Pic 4 :
A little wasted there. I think it could have been better if u did a vertical format and concentrate on the web/dew on the left, ie. ignore that big leaf and the bit of dewdrops on the bottom right.

My 2cents

..NuTs..

13th April 2003	#1
Wolfgang Moderator Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Riddle Realms Posts: 5,831	Portfolio: ReVisited Sunset Heaven Bound Bond Morning Dew Port & the City __________________ -- "High Wired, Dream Sired"

13th April 2003	#2
SniperD Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Behind the viewfinder... Posts: 5,954	your "heaven bound" appeals to me alot... very strange feel to it but the symmetry and colour tones are beautiful __________________ EYE-DEAS

16th April 2003	#3
jasphotography Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Singapore Posts: 1,362	Pic 1 is no no for me, nothing looks impressive or exceptional to me, the sea or the sky. I have seen better sea and better sky! Good try, wolfgang... The remaining pics however get my adrenaline pumped up a little. Pic 2: When I saw this, I always wonder what's that "thing" at the bottom which severed the parallel roads to a stop! It kept me guessing... Nonetheless, very interesteing composition but somehow I don't think it is incredibly sharp. Pic 3: My favourite of all, the grain, the black & white and all. Pic 4: The dew is lovely but the background is not, unfortunately you can't do anything about it. But hey, the spider can! The top right highlight is no excuse, wolfgang... Even if you can't move or change the background, you can always do a little bit of "gardening". The protruding grass at the bottom right "third" needs scissoring. Pic 5: Very interesting viewpoint too but again not sharp!!! The wind must be strong up there ehhh or your tripod must be getting weaker! Or both! Last edited by jasphotography; 16th April 2003 at 10:36 AM.

16th April 2003	#4
tomshen Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 3,719	Agreed the 3rd caught my eyes, but the rest... Keep shooting. __________________ Visit http://www.tomshenstudio.com

18th April 2003	#5
nuts Member Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 1,753	Actually, didn't really have much to comment/critique, but the 3rd pic is such a winner I had to say something. And since this is the Portfolio section, I had to say something on the rest as well, so here goes ... Pic 1 & 5 : Seems to be quite ordinary shots, so no real wow! factor here... Pic 2 : Very interesting composition! Overall lighting is quite well captured. The perspective is so engaging, I think any minor faults will be easily overlooked! Pic 3 : Did I mention this is a winner? Ok, to nitpick, the top may be a little tight, but really, the composition, the expressions, the b/w, the grain.., this is a wow! Pic 4 : A little wasted there. I think it could have been better if u did a vertical format and concentrate on the web/dew on the left, ie. ignore that big leaf and the bit of dewdrops on the bottom right. My 2cents ..NuTs..