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    Default natural pattern.

    hi i am very new to photography and to clubsnap too. am very glad that i could find a site where i could see nice photos and get come comments and advice from you guys.

    this was one of the photo when i 1st started few months back. it was very a nice day after rain, and very nice blue sky. when i looked up at that site, i saw the brunches made out some pattern to the empty sky, and i think it's interesting. kindly advice if the photos looks busy?!

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    the idea is there..
    the pattern is nice..but the leaves on the branches is the one thats messy

    branch pattern with minimal leaves would be better in my opinion..
    but cannot be you go and pluck the leaves b4 taking the shot rite..(certain things beyond our control )

    other than the messy leaves good shot,good idea and good composition. in my opinion

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    Quote Originally Posted by die Blende View Post
    the idea is there..
    the pattern is nice..but the leaves on the branches is the one thats messy

    branch pattern with minimal leaves would be better in my opinion..
    but cannot be you go and pluck the leaves b4 taking the shot rite..(certain things beyond our control )

    other than the messy leaves good shot,good idea and good composition. in my opinion
    thanks Die Blende, I see your point, and now i can see why i feel it's bit messy.. i din realised it's the leaves but now you mentioned. thanks!!

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    you might want to watch ur exposure a bit. There are certain areas which looks like over blown to me.
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    hi nigel, thanks for your advice. i did a lomo effect with photoshop to cover up some light. what you guys think?

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    It does look a little too busy and the lamp's clean lines are marred by the background. Might want to change to a wide angle and move closer to the subject for a slightly more dramatic effect too.

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