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    Quote Originally Posted by Sion View Post
    What you want
    Rain or Haze
    From Heaven or Indon
    technically wrong, cannot be considered a haiku ... you need to go by the 5-7-5 rule ... but nightmare broke the rule in the last piece also, was a 5-8-5 instead of 5-7-5 but yours cannot lah, 3-3-5, is that a Sionku invented by Sion?

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    try colored filters. =)

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    Quote Originally Posted by eikin View Post
    technically wrong, cannot be considered a haiku ... you need to go by the 5-7-5 rule ... but nightmare broke the rule in the last piece also, was a 5-8-5 instead of 5-7-5 but yours cannot lah, 3-3-5, is that a Sionku invented by Sion?
    Sa Sa Goh
    Si Sin-Sua-Lai Ku
    Chai Boh Chai?
    Last edited by Sion; 26th July 2007 at 01:13 AM.

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    Default Re: I hate the rain

    i love rain
    but not rain per se
    the weather.

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    Corny this is at that,
    provide laughs i will with big belly roar,
    funny is not what this is!


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    Quote Originally Posted by schon View Post
    i love rain
    but not rain per se
    the weather.
    hmmm ... let me try rephrase

    The rain that i love,
    Is not the rain in the rain.
    A warm cup of tea.


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    Default Re: I hate the rain

    Ai Hong Wu Hong
    Ai Chui Wu Chui
    Ai Hip Siong Wu Chio Bu.

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    Quote Originally Posted by eikin View Post
    hmmm ... let me try rephrase

    The rain that i love,
    Is not the rain in the rain.
    A warm cup of tea.

    ok i think i
    need to join nightmare in bed
    i mean, my own bed.

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    Quote Originally Posted by eikin View Post
    technically wrong, cannot be considered a haiku ... you need to go by the 5-7-5 rule ... but nightmare broke the rule in the last piece also, was a 5-8-5 instead of 5-7-5 but yours cannot lah, 3-3-5, is that a Sionku invented by Sion?
    You know Haiku
    But I know Bah Ku
    with no Teh

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sion View Post
    Ai Hong Wu Hong
    Ai Chui Wu Chui
    Ai Hip Siong Wu Chio Bu.

    Wind, Sion wanted
    Her silky hair lifted high.
    She wore a fat wig.

    Sion wants water,
    Running down her tender skin.
    Makeup all messed up.

    Last edited by eikin; 26th July 2007 at 01:25 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by schon View Post
    i love rain
    but not rain per se
    the weather.
    I love Rain...
    Especially STORMY WEATHER..
    love LIghtnings..
    Love the Sounds of water splatting and Thunder Roaring..

    Then I tug into my comfy bed and fell asleep..

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    Rain is quite ok
    When drama presents up there
    But it's just so grey

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    Yellow rain from the front
    Bad wind from behind
    Sign that says GENTLEMEN?

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    Sionitry, hahaha. Haikus should be 5-7-5 in terms of syllables like eikin has said.

    Bad wind from behind
    The people gasp and turn red
    Methane bad for health!

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    Quote Originally Posted by night86mare View Post
    Sionitry, hahaha. Haikus should be 5-7-5 in terms of syllables like eikin has said.

    Bad wind from behind
    The people gasp and turn red
    Methane bad for health!
    Haiku zenzen wakanai
    Maiku shukoshi wakaru
    Paiku wakatakunai

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    i wonder what will happen if it rains on 9 Aug evening.. will they postponed the parade ?

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    Quote Originally Posted by raincool2005 View Post
    i wonder what will happen if it rains on 9 Aug evening.. will they postponed the parade ?

    choi, i will be working there leh...

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    Nice weather to sleep... best is early morning rain, when you wake up you feel like staying in bed longer.

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    Quote Originally Posted by LOTUSfairy View Post
    choi, i will be working there leh...
    why not ? the world is now experiencing weird weather patterns... i am not puzzled that snow will come to Singapore soon..

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sion View Post
    Haiku zenzen wakanai
    Maiku shukoshi wakaru
    Paiku wakatakunai
    ?!

    Where's your black high heels series?

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