Dance Performance

[spmong]

Just want to share one of my photos

[leejay]

Cool shot. Vigor is captured.

[rOnGrEn]

Good Try.

I might be wrong, but seems to me that the blur doesn't come from motion blur alone, maybe a bit OOF? Some humble suggestions...maybe you can try cloning away the red spot above the head, and burning away the two audience at the background to make a more impactful shot. You might also want to try very-slightly burn the skirt to bring back some colours..

[spmong]

Originally Posted by leejay Cool shot. Vigor is captured.

Thanks, but lots to learn

[spmong]

Originally Posted by rOnGrEn Good Try. I might be wrong, but seems to me that the blur doesn't come from motion blur alone, maybe a bit OOF? Some humble suggestions...maybe you can try cloning away the red spot above the head, and burning away the two audience at the background to make a more impactful shot. You might also want to try very-slightly burn the skirt to bring back some colours..

the focusing is not fast enough, but i guess i want to create the motion blur effect. you are absolutely right about the red dot and audience. thanks....

[dawson]

i'd prefer to include her face and expression

[Redsun]

I would prefer to see the face too,Ou have any shots with the face?

[zoossh]

Originally Posted by spmong the focusing is not fast enough, but i guess i want to create the motion blur effect. you are absolutely right about the red dot and audience. thanks....

the focusing and the motion blur are different issues. i think you focused onto the audience behind.

[k3nshinx]

hello ts, can i add my picture on dance into your thread. i left it critique but... not much comments..

i think your picture is oos and if the spin showed her face it would have been a wonderful one