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    Default emotion: sad and helpless

    this time i took this pic of my classmates.
    actually he was swaying his hair to one side.
    bt then the way he do it is so sad and helpless as if he just broke up with his girlfriend.
    so i jus tune my 50mm to a big app and took.
    hopefully i can get all of your best comments..
    thanks..



    Last edited by eikin; 16th July 2007 at 10:16 PM. Reason: attach picture to thread.

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    Default Re: emotion: sad and helpless

    1. Lack of eye contact. Rather, I can hardly see them at all
    2. Out of focus
    3. Distracting background elements. Especially the object near the cheek and another on the left edge of the frame.

    I can vaguely feel that sense of sadness you are trying to convey. But other than that... not much else of the portrait works for me. Sorry.

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    Default Re: emotion: sad and helpless

    Quote Originally Posted by Yatlapball View Post
    1. Lack of eye contact. Rather, I can hardly see them at all
    2. Out of focus
    3. Distracting background elements. Especially the object near the cheek and another on the left edge of the frame.

    I can vaguely feel that sense of sadness you are trying to convey. But other than that... not much else of the portrait works for me. Sorry.
    thanks..will work on that..

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