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    I was in the room, taking shots of the brides makeup preparations when the groom appeared from the corner of my eye. I somehow knew that this was a shot not to be missed and I immediately focused on his face and composed the shot.

    I would like to think that the shot shows the grooms expression of love/concern over his bride even when she is within the house.

    Things tt I thought I didn't do well:
    1) Bad tilt of the camera. You can see it from the vertical door line.
    2) Distracting wedding gown in the centre...although it is the only clue tt shows the couple is getting married
    3) Too harsh shadows on the grooms face

    Comments? Critiques?

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    If you did not mention about them being bride and the groom I will think the man is getting impatient waiting for the lady...
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    Default Re: Always Looking Over You

    To add on the 3 that you mentioned, I also do not really like the bride's face being cut off from the frame.

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    Quote Originally Posted by dominator View Post
    If you did not mention about them being bride and the groom I will think the man is getting impatient waiting for the lady...
    i have to agree with this. The groom's look is more towards an impatient look to me...

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    Quote Originally Posted by dominator View Post
    If you did not mention about them being bride and the groom I will think the man is getting impatient waiting for the lady...
    I third that. But your idea is there. Good try.
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    Thanks everyone! Every photo is a learning step! Well.. most of the time anyways..

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