Pacific Black Ducks

[ChrISdWonG]

Actually, for these photos, I think the species doesn't really matter... but thats what they are anyway. Critique please! I think my composition could be improved...

[garou12]

Originally Posted by ChrISdWonG Actually, for these photos, I think the species doesn't really matter... but thats what they are anyway. Critique please! I think my composition could be improved...

The first one is nice for symbolism but the other 2 are backlit too much so you can't make out the duckie's details...try using some fill in flash next time. Composition wise 1 is the most intriguing of the lot. 3 is kinda plain.

[ChrISdWonG]

Mmm ok noted..

I guess it doesn't work then, 'coz having it backlit was the whole idea... they're supposed to be sillhouettes, so the fill flash would've spoiled my intention.

Thanks!

[garou12]

Originally Posted by ChrISdWonG Mmm ok noted.. I guess it doesn't work then, 'coz having it backlit was the whole idea... they're supposed to be sillhouettes, so the fill flash would've spoiled my intention. Thanks!

o ok i didn't know you wanted the silhouettes...in that case the back light works for all of them...but #1 has the best composition in my opinion.

[ChrISdWonG]

Ah ok, thanks!

Any hints on how to improve the composition for #2?