Shadow&light

pantan · 28th May 2007

I am trying out with lights and shadow, this was taken from a bunch of leaves, can you pls give your comment on this picture? How can I do better?

Thanks for your time and comment.

Michael · 30th May 2007

interesting approach and composition. where to improve?
> sharpness: not enough or rather i a problems to see where the focus is. DOF seems to be shallow and in original size nothing is really sharp and crisp.
> exposure: develop it with a bit more contrast

otherwise very nice colour rendering, keep it up

28th May 2007	#1
pantan New Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 23	Shadow&light I am trying out with lights and shadow, this was taken from a bunch of leaves, can you pls give your comment on this picture? How can I do better? Thanks for your time and comment. Last edited by zaren; 31st May 2007 at 08:42 PM. Reason: image link edited

30th May 2007	#2
Michael Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Woodlands Posts: 706	Re: Shadow&light interesting approach and composition. where to improve? > sharpness: not enough or rather i a problems to see where the focus is. DOF seems to be shallow and in original size nothing is really sharp and crisp. > exposure: develop it with a bit more contrast otherwise very nice colour rendering, keep it up