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Join Date: May 2007
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Hi, took this snapshot in thailand Loripuri - Sun Flowers Field
Arrived there in the morning.. good sunshine.. Beautiful valley with so many sunflowers and color is brilliant... As most of the sunflowers are tall.. taller then myself.. managed to find a scaldfolding, climbed onto it and waited and waited for two ladies to coming into view before this snapshort taken..esle thinking taking only sunflowers. !!! something is missing.. Serious and Honest feedback welcome.. Camera model C730UZ Resolution 640 x 480 Flash Yes Focal length 5.9mm Exposure time 0.001 s (10/10000) Aperture f/4.5 ISO equivalent 90 Metering Mode matrix Exposure program (auto) ![]() Last edited by zen4859; 23rd May 2007 at 03:16 PM. |
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Join Date: Jan 2007
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beautiful. i can tell that a lot of planning and effort has been taken to shoot this photo. i also like the fact that you didn't over do the editing part.
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Join Date: May 2007
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tks zac03,
i managed to climb onto a scaldfolding and not being able to move about to take this snapshot.. and it being a bright morning.. and waiting for these two ladies to come into view.. rgds - zen4859 |
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Join Date: Oct 2006
Posts: 189
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Hi I am new to photography and was wondering why you would need a flash even though it was a bright morning?
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Join Date: May 2007
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Contributor
Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: Singapore (Kallang)
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the 2 girls don't quite do it for me, but the sea of yellow is beautiful.
suggest cutting out at least 1/2 the sky in the back, and adjust the curves to bring out the greens and yellow a little more!! |
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Join Date: May 2007
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tks for your comments.. actually my intentions to include 2 girls is that i can show a comparison on the height/size of the sunflowers.. coz without them.. i got nothing to show.. only a sea of yellow.. |
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Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 1,533
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composition dont work for me.
rather bland and static sky and flower field and the gals does nothing to animate it: can't see face, no interesting expressions or postures, and their colours are not contrasty ennough. For example a tall slim girl in red walking away down a row will provide a whole world of contrasts in colours and forms and excitement. Of course as a candid shot, there is nothing much you can with the gals, except wait for a better moment, which may never come. the blues and yellows can be saturated but that will not make the picture any more exciting. technically, the curvature is distracting - something easily corrected. as to the flash, it does not seem to do any harm, but does not seem nec in this case. using a flash is ok as filled even in the brightest of daylight if it is used as fill-in to reveal important details in the shadows. |
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Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: Osaka; Yala; Bridgeport
Posts: 348
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I took the liberty to help you in this. If you don't like it, let me know, I'll remove it.
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Join Date: May 2007
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hi eyes.. tks... i like this better than the original one i posted. anyway i not familiar good with any photoshop or software for making the photo much better.. just learning.. please give more comment.. if any.. rgds |
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