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Old 14th May 2007   #1
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Default Sigh... It's Monday again...

This was taken last year during a photoshoot for my company.. After taking a series of happy smiling shots, I thought some sian sian looking shots would be nice. Hence I shot this and like it the most. Am a newbie, so hope to get comments on how can I improve, particularly regarding the lighting.. Thanks!

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Old 14th May 2007   #2
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Default Re: Sigh... It's Monday again...

haha nice pic. well kinda snapshot like but i like the subject matter
try a tighter crop for effect.
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Old 14th May 2007   #3
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Default Re: Sigh... It's Monday again...

Looks a like soft...
Try a bounced flash the next time, it may be less harsh.
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Old 23rd May 2007   #4
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Thanks for your comments, tribal.snake & zac08. Will try a tighter crop and a bounced flash next time..
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