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  1. #1
    Join Date
    Nov 2005
    California, USA

    Default Get Dressed

    Still Life photo shoot for my class:

    I got in trouble! So let me answer the following:

    1. in what area is critique to be sought?
    First time doing still life in a studio, so pretty much, I need to know what I should be doing.

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    Obviously, a good and humorous shot.

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)

    It was really hot out. So I decided to take off my pants and change into shorts. I was also in a punky "go eff yourself" kind of mood. Careless, but carefree at the same time, if you know what I mean.

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture.
    I actually like the darker aspects of it, the funky shadowing at the top of the jeans and the skinny feeling to the legs. I think the pose of the pants makes it more flirty and fun.
    Last edited by paxluv; 13th May 2007 at 01:12 PM.

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    Default Re: Get Dressed

    Two comments,

    1. Lighting - Try to play around with your lighting set up to eliminate the multiple shadows at the top of the jeans.

    2. Exposure - The exposure seems a little underexposed - the details of some parts of the jeans seems to be lost.

  3. #3
    Join Date
    Dec 2006
    west side!

    Default Re: Get Dressed

    watch the lights, some of your shadows are werid and choose a slightly brighter bg for effect
    i like the idea of your composition, but how abt folding the jeans slightly at the kness?
    dun see what's so humuours abt this?


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